POETRY
These are the three drafts for the original poetry we have to do for a creative writing class. Enjoy!
ORIGINAL
“Standing Still”
My soul gallops
roams wild and free.
travels places
unknown to the world.
smells and feels
a breath of fresh air
dewy green grass
the morningafter, soft, tiny buds grow.
dreams of faraway breakaways
imprisoned in dark waters
sunk deep in to the leaves
with many dying butterflies
fluttering their weakening wings
until dawn breaks
My soul has been seen.
out there dancing in the whispering winds
wheeling in open skies, running at liberty.
never entrapped, never tamed, never will.
May you have a nice ride.
REVISED
“Neigh Myself to Sleep”
My feet moves in high and low
hurdles. gallops
hither and yon, then and now
through faraway breakaways
roams wild and free.
Travels to places
unknown to thee.
O my prince,
feel the fresh air!
swiftly I prance,
softly you touched my hair.
the grasses dewy green
when dusk falls,
tiny buds grow. I rest my cold feet
by the waterfalls;
sinking in, seeping through
deep in to the leaves, I fleet.
These legs I wore, indefatigable
The roads ahead, unfathomable
Feel the rush! yet I’m still.
These rapid dark waters!
until dawn breaks
My soul has been seen.
Out there dancing in the whispering winds
wheeling on skies unbroken, running gaily at liberty.
As I stand untamed, follow the flutter of the butterflies
them wilting souls will lead with weakening wings
Fore shadows never disappear
’til the Sun shines on the other side
Before thee I shall reappear.
I may be Your maiden, your mare
Here I stand never mined, never will.
May you have a nice ride.
FINAL
“Horsepower”
My feet moves in high, low
hurdles. gallops
hither and thither, then now
through faraway breakaways
I roam wild and free.
Travels places
unknown to thee.
Come, my prince,
feel the fresh air!
A single soft touch to my hair
and short and swift! I prance
to the grasses dewy green
until dusk falls,
tiny buds grow. By the waterfalls
I standstill, rest my cold feet
sink in dim, seep through deep
in to the leaves, I fleet
These legs I wore, indefatigable
The roads ahead, unfathomable
Feel the rush! Yet I’m still.
These running waters!
Until dawn breaks
away you came with me.
Hop on. Let’s dance to the whispering winds -
wheel on the unbroken skies -
I set them butterflies free,
whose dying souls weakened
with whom my wings have wilted.
Hang on! For these shadows will disappear
Look ahead, and ripple, I will
against the currents,
before the Sun,
greener grasses will reappear
For you, my prince:
I never mind,
I’ll never flee
Here I stand
as your maiden, your mare.
May you have a nice ride.
Muchaluva,
Stace